I just sent perhaps the most umprofessional letter

Hi,

I am Priscilla Lim, a Student, going to graduate from Fairfield Methodist School (Secondary) in a matter of 6 days and i was wondering if IKEA has any job openings for students during the holidays. Firstly, let me just say how much i love IKEA, (which is one of the reasons why i wish to apply for a temp job here) it is really not so much about the money as it is about how amazing the culture is at IKEA. Every time i go there, it just feels as though it is something different. Therefore, i am writing this email in hope that there is a job, perhaps suitable for someone like me at IKEA. (more preferably the Alexandra Outlet)
I have pretty good interpersonal skills, i am good with strangers, so sales would probably be a good fit. I was Debate president for two years in Secondary school and an EXCO member of the Symphonic Band. I really hope that there is a job suitable for me during this holidays at IKEA.
It is, for now, my dream job.
Please let me know if you need any more information and i would be glad to provide it.

Yours Sincerely,
Priscilla Lim.

Hmmm.... now i Wonder what they'll say...